Thursday, April 17, 2008

Circle of Love



Since the lighting of our burning candle
Our flame burns with twisted lies and distress
Always dwindling and sheer of scandals
But through this never has it burnt out on us

The wick gets stronger through all our secrets
Lies and deceptions with ghost of our past
Never has it died cause of our warm hearts
Till that day the wax melts like little dust

Dripping down the side leaving waxed figures
Bruises of your hot wax, always remains
Staying inside us till its configures
Still we will make it through the burning pains

Circles are forever never ending
Run around the candle but be caring.





Analaysis

Circle of Love Analysis
In my sonnet, it shows how a couple's love endures everything and keeps on persisting no matter what happens. It shows how their love can endure just about everything and from the difficult times, they've managed to grow closer and stronger from it. "Since the lighting of our burning candle, our flame burns with twisted lies and distress" This line talks about how from the very beginning till now, it has been complicated with lies and distress. "Always dwindling and sheer of scandals, But through this never has it burnt out on us" Even through complications and scandals, it may hurt their relationship but doesn't end it.
In the next stanza, it compares a candles wick to the couple's relationship and how the flame keeps on burning. "The wick gets stronger through all our secrets, Lies and deceptions with ghost of our past" From previous events and difficulties that might have occurred, they were able to put that behind them and move on. I wanted readers to see how their actions not only affect someone now, but they stay with that person forever. "Never has it died cause of our warm hearts, Till that day the wax melts like little dust" Their love for each other continues to grow and won't stop.
"Dripping down the side leaving waxed figures, Bruises of your hot wax, always remains" The things that might have been said or done were forgiven but not forgotten and will always be remain. But, relationships are about learning from you're mistakes and changing yourself for the better. This should have painted a visual for the reader. To be able to see that the sadness and pain, caused by a loved one, really hurts. "Staying inside us till its configures Still we will make it through the burning pains" They continues to work through their obstacles and they somehow manage to stay together no matter how it is to endure.
The last two lines "Circles are forever never ending" this signifies that the hardships and difficulties in the relationship will never end but you need the hard times to experience the good times. 
"Run around the candle but be caring." Shows how even through the couple's relationship, care for the other person and be cautious of what you do.

1 comment:

Analia's School Blog said...

I love your sonnet, the imagery is amazing and it flows really well. The one thing I would fix are the words "secrets" and "hearts" in stanza two, they don't seem to really rhyme.